Thursday, September 10, 2009

Anecdote 3

Lastly, my grandma is loving. She shows she's loving by supporting you in everything that you do. She won't assume things about you. She always ask how you're doing, and how your day was. She's someone you can have fun with, because she's just a mellow person. This is why i think she's a loving person.

5 comments:

  1. Wow your grandama sure loves you. :)

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  2. This is all nice, Myra, but mostly very nonspecific. Keep away from writing in the present tense (my grandma won't assume things about you); instead, show specific things she's done in the past (once, when I was five years old...).

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